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Post by ZAPZ ! on Jan 3, 2010 11:28:37 GMT -5
Character PlotTHE BASICS Zapz is a paranoid schizophrenic, and as time goes on she will become more and more schizophrenic. She's a small package, but can pack quite the punch if provoked. Zapz is a four year old Rho in Retronym and is very true to the pack's mentality. Click Here For Full BioFor more info on her mental disability: Click Here---------------------------------------------ROMANCE IS IN THE AIR Interest;Unrequited feelings;Mutual likings; BruiserLove;FINALE - mates;---------------------------------------------FRIENDS FOREVER Acquaintances;Close;Friends;Best Friends;Crazy friends;---------------------------------------------THE UNCOMFORTABLES Bad start;Uncomfortable meets; Ryelee Slip of words;Enemies; ArcheSlaves;Just post below with a quick overview of your canine and where you want them. Put some thought behind it too- go back into the history a little to explain if you need to, I'm open for that
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Post by Arche on Jan 3, 2010 15:09:28 GMT -5
Hm...I think what Arche would really hate about Zapz was her instability. She would think her unsuitable to really benefit the pack. Maybe they could have had a few distinct disagreements in the past that strengthened this? Maybe we could work it into parts of their past that already exist, like Arche's Braize or Zapz' rough childhood?
It feels strange, talking about the characters when their names are the same as ours. Call me moonwolf, k? Maybe then it won't be so wierd..
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Post by ZAPZ ! on Jan 3, 2010 15:19:12 GMT -5
Ok Moonwolf x] Hmmm, we could work it into our histories, maybe a chance encounter once? Some tense words passed back and forth? I know that Braize died- he was injured in a hunt and killed by the alpha male right? Maybe, during that hunt her tried telling Zapz to do something and she snapped at him, bit him some where? Or maybe the hunt never happened and he just didn't want to admit to being beat up by a deranged girl xD --OR-- If Arche and Zapz met in younger years, maybe we could say something to the affect like, Arche asked her parents what was wrong with Zapz- or spoke about her as a freak of some sort- or maybe that she feared/fears the lunatic. >3 Hmmm I'll keep thinking- but what do you think? Do we want a serious hatred- like, "I'll kill you if I see you" or something slightly civil like "Watch it when you're around me, I'll kick you ***"?
:3 You can call me Roo if it helps.
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Post by Arche on Jan 3, 2010 15:33:46 GMT -5
Hm... I like the first idea. Braize and Zapz could have gotten into a little fight during the hunt. How about he sprung at the buck's neck for the kill and got thrown by the antlers, then got in a fight with Zapz when he tried to tell her what to do? Something along the lines of: 'Why should I take advice from you, when you nearly got yourself killed?' maybe? Or something else.. the Alpha goes in to break it up, and the buck gets away. Now the Alpha's doubly mad, and so is Braize...and so Braize challenges him and dies?
I don't think Arche would blame Zapz for his death, more like...hm. More like because she aided in the events that lead to his death, coupled with her borderline insanity, Arche takes dsitrust to a hole new level? Distrust, and resentment, and a complete lack of respect.
Hm...
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Post by ZAPZ ! on Jan 3, 2010 15:40:00 GMT -5
Hmm, yeah maybe when he went for the killing bite she got in the way somehow- maybe they both tried for the same bite? He could have yelled at her, tried 'putting her in place' and they could have started fighting and then the alpha stepped in to break it up, took her side in the matter and punished Braize? Then Braize could have been severely angered, challenged the alpha with hopes of winning so he could make Zapz pay without getting in trouble for it? And maybe Zapz could have giggled about his death or something, mutilated his body more after everyone left- maybe took an eye ball for a prize for a week or two? Maybe then every encounter she had with Arche she teases her about the death of her friend; making Arche hate Zapz, but Zapz would think it all a sort of game? :3
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Post by Arche on Jan 3, 2010 15:45:23 GMT -5
Yes! Definitely a winner. Arche would have wanted to kill her as soon as she knew what Zapz had done to Braize's body. It would have been the last straw. But she would lie low, because she didn't want to end up like Braize? She would want to keep herself alive so one day she could be Queen and give Zapz the beating she thought she deserved, with no consequences.
I <3 me some good motivation for revenge.
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Post by b e r n e s e . on Jan 3, 2010 15:46:50 GMT -5
Prosper would probably make a good friend with her. Prosper loathes humans and wishes to kill them, even though the nearest old house is over fifty miles away. He is a neutral wolf, but he can get stubborn at times, making him a good friend for Zapz. Or they could be enemies. I just want to stir up some trouble with the duo.
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Post by ZAPZ ! on Jan 3, 2010 15:47:06 GMT -5
Perfect! =D So for now should we just have them making faces at each other? A dark but silent unease, and then whoever comes out on top put it all out on the table and see what the dice rolls? Or should we have them dancing the thin line of control?
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Post by b e r n e s e . on Jan 3, 2010 15:52:41 GMT -5
Doesn't matter to me. If your character acts cool with being friends, so will mine, but if Zapz pulls his fur, he will get mad. c:
Also, I'll be making two characters soon- a blind healer named Selph and a one-eyed african wild dog with deformed paws named Ryelee, a confused and broken loner, but soon to be a Colcannon member. I think that Ryelee should be terrified of Zapz. That would be funny. And then Selph should think that being bad is wrong and say bad things to Z... Maybe even get in a fight? lol, all I know is that plotting is fun.
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Post by Arche on Jan 3, 2010 15:57:12 GMT -5
Hmm, I think a mostly silent unease would do well, up until auditions for Queen. Then the sparks, man, would be a-flyin'. A few biting words, maybe some stiff accidental meetings at first, trying to resist the urge to go for eachother's throats.
If Prosper was friends with Zapz, that would definitely add to Arche's hate towards her original pack. If Prosper and Zapz were enemies, I think Arche would feel a bit more respect for Prosper, but only in that one area.
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Post by ZAPZ ! on Jan 3, 2010 16:59:09 GMT -5
Prosper--I didn't see your post xD MW that last one from me was to you.
&Hm, friends could be worked out- possibly. Maybe he's a bit edgy around her? Thinks she's kinda weird, but interesting at the same time? Like, he wants to know just how crazy she is so he kinda plays with her head a bit? That could work, and then maybe sometime in the future it goes to far and they become enemies. >]
As for Ryelee- that'd be great! Haha, she'd had fun messing with him, just scaring him at random times. first making him think she's gotten better then just turning right 'round and act like she wants to eat him for lunch. Haha
Selph- Hmmm, that could be interesting. Maybe he tries to give her stuff to make her symptoms lass and lass? Like maybe he thinks that if he can give her enough herbs than she can become more stable in her head- maybe he gives her something to prevent her from coming into heat? Just so the disorder doesn't reach past her genetic line?
And then back to Arche- agreed, keep a slight cool until the auditions then it's all out war between the two. Maybe once the pack grows, we could get some to take sides? One for Zapz as Queen, one for Arche for Queen- that could build up some good tension.
Damn this turning out awesome xD
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Post by Arche on Jan 3, 2010 17:04:58 GMT -5
Oooh, I agree with you there on the awesome thing. It would be so interesting! Seeing who takes sides, who remains indifferent...How both of them take the growing pack interest in their rivalry. I can hardly wait!!
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Post by ZAPZ ! on Jan 3, 2010 17:18:03 GMT -5
Neither can I!! AHH! We need to get more members >D [Goes off to recruit her friends]
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Post by b e r n e s e . on Jan 3, 2010 17:18:21 GMT -5
TO Z-
Oh, my bad. It's kinda hard to understand who people are talking to when there are things flying around at all sides. And that sounds cool, he probably would be a bit edgy around her since he doesn't like Colcannon or Retronym, but they could be kinda weird friends or enemies. I'll get to that thread once I'm done posting this. ^^
For Ryelee, she would get so scared! She would be like, all cowaring while Z says that she is going to eat her or something. Aw, that would stir up some trouble. She is also going to be mates with Halcyon, so you might also find him coming your way. Halcyon is going to leave Ryelee in the dust one day for another female wolf, and he hadn't decided who yet. She is also going to be alone and preggie whenever he finds a new mate, so maybe she should turn evil and join Retronym, and Zapz and her could be friends? Just a suggestion, but I think she will join Retronym with her load of babies. c: More members for that evil pack then. I think she'll probably have three or four.
For Selph, that would be very interesting, and he should find a perfect amount of herbs to try to do that (even though he would most likely fail! xD) He could do a lot of things to try to make her angry or better, like catching her something to eat but putting herbs in it. He's going to be in Colcannon, though. Maybe he could pretend to be her friend at first so that he can try to make her better.
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Post by b e r n e s e . on Jan 3, 2010 17:25:52 GMT -5
*Sorry about double-posting*
TO A + Z-
Maybe we should hold and advertising contest. For each website you advertise on you get $4 or something, and with money you can buy wonderful things from the shop. I don't advertise- I affiliate. What do you guys think? Yah or nay?
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